Within this skin
We bleed as one
And wash against the shore.
Boundaries blur
Where are we now
No starting and no end.
With transient soul
We touch all truths
And leave no trace or scar.
We move as one
A spirit thought
In caverns only dreamed.
The perfect heart
In ether’s realm
We watch, we see, we soar.
john flanagan said:
Such a palpable sense of union and oneness
delivered in well-chosen, thoughtful words.
Chris, i like this very much indeed.
My best to You
john
chrisnelson61 said:
Thank you very much, John, your words are appreciated.
Rachael Charmley said:
I like this very much too, Chris. I am elevated.invigorated by your words. Your chosen metre so adds to its power. Well done.
chrisnelson61 said:
Thank you, Rachael, I appreciate your kind words.
thegrammarofmatter said:
I love this
chrisnelson61 said:
Thank you so much, and may I take this opportunity to say how much I enjoy reading your fascinating, informative and stimulating posts. As there is no ‘comments’ box on your site I am glad that I have now been able to pass this on.
thegrammarofmatter said:
Thank you! It means a lot.
Bruce Goodman said:
We bleed as one… and leave no scar… I really like this poem, Chris.
chrisnelson61 said:
Thank you, Bruce, I appreciate that!
chrisrenney said:
This is so very beautiful – the unlocking, untying and being free.
chrisnelson61 said:
Thank you, Chris, I’m glad you like it!
megdekorne said:
” we watch , we see , we soar ” ….so beautiful this mantra for me on this cool autumn morning as the sun touches my desk and I write about a difficult past…read out loud the sounds of your words are mesmerizing …and comforting in a strange way …thankyou Chris for your elegant gift ….love , megxxx
chrisnelson61 said:
Thank you so much – i really appreciate your kind words.
scottishmomus said:
‘With transient soul
We touch all truths’ says it all for me here, Chris. Someone else has used the word ‘elegant’. If elegance is understaed beauty that strikes, this is it.
chrisnelson61 said:
Thank you very much, Anne-Marie, I really appreciate your mind words.