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Walk me through the park
Through night-time’s velvet cloak
And whisper words near silent
That only we can hear,
I’ll step within your shoe
And neither lead nor follow
But glide as one on air
A cushion for our feet,
Walk me through the trees
Whose branches seek to hold
And mold us to their will
But we shall not succumb,
I’ll wrap my hand in yours
And feel your fingers touch
Somewhere no-one else
Has ever thought to go,
Above the purple sky
A silver moon will watch
And flush the crouching demons
From the violent shadows,
Walk me through the park
To who knows where or cares
As one in two we go
A journey of the soul.
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Beautiful, Chris.
Thank you, Rachael.
Yes, just beautiful, Chris!
Thank you, I appreciate that!
such a beautiful trust within the quiet you painted
Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts – I appreciate it.
You’re Welcome 🙂
Not wishing to draw comparisons with your other work, but this one had such a soft velvety touch; it flowed beautifully and with such sensitivity. I loved it! Thx Chris. 🙂
Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Can do nought else but concur with others here, Chris. Beautiful. Sensitivity wends through from start to finish.
Thanks, Anne-Marie. The wanderings of the pen…
I can only agree with the other comments here Chris. Simply beautiful and joy to read.
Thank you, Mark, I appreciate your reading.
Mark just said to me ‘Chris has a wonderful new poem’ and so you do. It is like a hush.
Chris, that is such a lovely thing for Mark to say – I’m quite touched. Thank you, too, I always appreciate the fact that you take the time to read my words.
Chris …flowing so softly , so melodically , simply beautiful , even more so when recited in the hours of an autumn dusk …thank you , love , megxxx
Thank you for your kind words, Meg. I always appreciate you reading and am glad you enjoy my words.
For me, Chris, this works both on the personal level – so personal i feel as
if i’m eavesdropping – and on the broader universal level where spirituality counts most.
This is fine indeed.
My best to You
john
I think that your interpretation of this is pretty accurate, John. This was one of those pieces that began as one thing but then decided to take its own path! Thank you for such a thoughtful comment.
Velvety, cushioned beauty in your words, Chris.
– Julia
Thank you, I appreciate your kind words.
My pleasure!
I’m imagining a gentleman of 17th century reciting this to his lady! It’s got an old world romantic feel to it – very sweet indeed! 🙂
That’s very perceptive, Suzy, as that is the flavour that I had hoped to evoke! Thank you for your kind words.
::sighing::
Thank you!